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                                 a trust game


that man -

he laid down
on a bed of nails
for me.

and then he asked,

"Lover, take the axe
and chop this apple
where it rests
in the hollow of my chest."


so, i did.


with care

                i aimed,
                           i swung,
                                        i struck

                the axe,
                            the air,
                                       the apple.
                                                              
                                                                         
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:iconbogbrush:
Ooo... something a little different, I like :)
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HaikuKitty Aug 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I really enjoyed writing this one. :D One of my own favorites so far... I have much to learn.
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:iconzephyrchaser:
Mmh. Well done!

I'm here, and my life is either going to get a lot calmer or explode in the near future. Either way, there should be writin's, eventually, promise! :) Thanks for thinking of me. :heart:
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HaikuKitty Aug 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I hope for the calmer route! :D

Thank you for liking this.
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:iconzephyrchaser:
I can't help it! :D
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houstonaxl Aug 13, 2008
:pray: :devil: Nice!
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HaikuKitty Aug 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconretrozombie:
This gives me chills... :fear:
...in a good way, though... I think :paranoid:

Very well written! :nod:
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HaikuKitty Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Was this good, or was it evil? :chix0r:

I'll never tell! :evillaugh:

Thank you much for the comment and the fav! :blowkiss:
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