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a thirty-five mile an hour breeze whips the caution tape to a frenzy...

wind versus
caution tape,
who will win?


I walk in the poorer section of town:

yelling
spills out the door,
I wouldn't go in.


low rider jeans suck ass:

a thin slice of moon
exposed
a crack.


bad cat!

sweet cat,
must you claw
the leather couch?


the bird bath is full of leaves:

playful winds
pulling green leaves
down in May.
©2009 *HaikuKitty
:iconhaikukitty:

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some thoughts as I took my walk today......

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Fun, amusing and delightful.
I feel like I have been on an interesting stroll with you full of sights and sounds.
I particularly like the second and third one.

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconhaikukitty:
I had a good time with these, so free and easy, I love summertime walks in the dark...

--
First learn the meaning of what you say, and then speak.
Epictetus

“The world we live in is vastly different from the world we think we live in.” Nicholas Taleb
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playful and full of whimsy - now that is walking Loretta :D

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