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This is for moyanII haiku journal contest.... [link] My eclectic and erratic thoughts unedited for you all to see! :D I love this because it chronicles Cam's and my night together in short bursts that will remind me.

The poems...

May 29th Journaling on the Deck


Atlantic City - glitz
Cherry Hill - class
contrasts in money.


I love one,
the Ipod sings
Dean loves 'em all!

(a tribute to Dean Martin)


a pink marker
finds
a voice.


Little dog loves me better than him:

a cookie
fails to budge
little dog
off my lap.


police cars and an ambulance hurry by -

short, short, short, short, short,
long______long____long_____
short, short, short, short,short,
someone's in trouble.

waiting for a day off,
and then -
June is gone.



a pinot grigio
and fresh air blend -
yummmmmm.....



I experience jealousy.

so beautiful,
maintenance free
tan skin.




doing a dance
trying to get it on,
starlings.




waiting for the bus
at the wrong stop.



only gettin'
four miles per gallon -
Bob's shaggin' wagon.


All discussed or seen in about two hours of deck sitting.....

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:iconaqua-rat:
I like the multi-colours!

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconhaikukitty:
I always write with markers and gel pens, color coordinated to the thought. It is how I learn. :dance: Thank you...

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First learn the meaning of what you say, and then speak.
Epictetus

“The world we live in is vastly different from the world we think we live in.” Nicholas Taleb
:iconaqua-rat:
Bringing visual art and poetry together which is most appropriate for visual poetry!

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconesin:
looks like a nice place to write. :D
:iconmoyanii:
a rainbow in your haiku memo! as colorful as you are :D

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~secret study~
~silent studio~
:iconbogbrush:
Very colourful :) and writing on the decking with a glass of wine? it probably doesn't get better than that! :)

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Ethics? That's the place north of London init?
:iconanavah:
The paper has bloomed!! :heart:

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Thank you.
:iconjade-pandora:
I'll join you with my tea or coffee and let's see what beautifully colorful writing we can collaborate on! :D

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:iconhaikukitty:
I would like that...

--
First learn the meaning of what you say, and then speak.
Epictetus

“The world we live in is vastly different from the world we think we live in.” Nicholas Taleb

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May 29, 2009, 6:39:55 PM

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